I can see that you put a lot of time and effort into this. The animation was fluid and the artwork was wonderful. Just one side note for constructive criticism; try to make the lighting more consistent next time. The changes in lighting is distracting to the audience. Just something to think about.
I hope you make another one!
You sir, are amazing at art/animating/story telling. Consistently amazing at that!
I've been waiting for this!
Finally! Great stuff! Come out with more...!
I especially loved how it came full circle at the end. It really tied it up very nicely. A very emotional piece, and worthy of being called a masterpiece. I hope you've got it in you to make more!
I liked it. Music was pretty catchy. Animation was dece. Overall, PWNT.
Pretty good, why don't you stray away from stick figures, obviously you're talented enough to do so!
Perfect in every way.
Consistently visually stunning. The audio was synchronized perfectly. The futuristic world you created was unique and stylish. Overall, this submission was wonderful. It was flawless.
This flash... blew me away. I couldn't tell if I was on Newgrounds or watching T.V. Honestly. This is the best flash I've seen in a while, and you can tell you put a lot of blood sweat and tears into making this. Beautiful craftmanship, I liked the way you did the frames, similar to that of a comic strip. I don't care what anyone else says, lack of plot, whatever, most flash artists realize hard work when they see it and this deserves a perfect score. I hope to see more in the future, and keep up the great work!
Not too bad.
Animation wasn't great, but it looks like you put a decent amount of work into it. The sound was a little off, and the plot was a little hazy. I think you could do really good if you put your mind to it. Try harder on the next episode.
Nice. I liked it.
Very nice flash animation. I liked the nice array of unique creatures in this animation.
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